[UGAF] Critiques

[Wade Preston Shearer]

> I am in the process of designing a logo for an employee training  
> company. I felt kind of good about this, until I saw the ski utah  
> logo. Anyways, let me know if this is any good.
>
> www.poderherbal.com/images/trainquil.jpg

My first comment would be about the "chalkboard." I find it very  
distracting. I is much too commanding, making it hard to even digest  
the name (which is the most important part). I would remove it and  
color the pie chart. The word could use some kerning. Does the pie in  
the pie chart intentionally not have a smooth arc "crust?" The  
heavier weight of the first "i" bothers me. Making him taller is  
fine, but I would keep him the same weight as the rest of the text.
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