[UGAF] Critiques

[Jessica Petersen]

I agree with several of the comments made earlier -

I like the concept, but it's still difficult to read - my eye focuses on the "I" and the Pie Chart, making the name of the company/product difficult to read.

As Rick suggested, I would also separate it into a logo and a mark. I think you're trying to accomplish too much in one space.

Also, think about how this design is going to look on a business card, stationary, packaging, website, etc. - it seems that you may find it is not very flexible in different situations.


I hope this helps! 

Jessica Petersen
UI Designer
jpetersen at omniture.com
801.722.7000 x 483 tel
801.722.7001 fax
-----Original Message-----
From: ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org [mailto:ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org] On Behalf Of Justin Giboney
Sent: Wednesday, June 27, 2007 11:43 AM
To: UGAF General Discussion
Subject: Re: [UGAF] Critiques

>  "fuzzy".
The whole thing is vector (InDesign), so any fuzziness is coming from  
me turning it into a pdf and then into a jpg

> breaking the guy and the pie out of the text
I'll try something like this, I just thought it would be more  
interesting and simple in the text.

Justin Giboney
www.giboneydesigns.com


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