[UGAF] Critiques

[Rick Moore]

Two things:
1. Why underline the type? Just wondering the significance behind that
decision. To me it adds unnecessary visual noise.
2. The figure is a little amoeba-like. Have you thought about making
him less wobbly looking? Maybe there is another solution other than
the person as icon.

Additionally, I usually work on one piece of a logo at a timen I.e
type first then mark or vice versa. I find it easier than trying to
swallow the whole steak at once so to speak.

On 6/27/07, Justin Giboney <giboney at giboneydesigns.com> wrote:
> sorry, it's  tra"i"nquil3.jpg. lol
>
> www.poderherbal.com/images/trainquil3.jpg
>
> Justin Giboney
> www.giboneydesigns.com
>
>
>
> On Jun 27, 2007, at 12:52 PM, Wade Preston Shearer wrote:
>
> >> Here is another one with the mark outside the text, but I don't
> >> know....
> >>
> >> www.poderherbal.com/images/tranquil3.jpg
> >
> > I'm getting a 404.
> >
> >
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