[UGAF] Critiques

[Jessica Petersen]

I don't personally like this new concept as much as previous concepts. The brain scan is too medical/scientific - it doesn't speak to the warmth or satisfaction that the consumer is suppose to feel upon using the product.

Your type is definitely much more tight. I would try to further enhance the difference between the "Train" and "quil" in your black versions. Keep in mind that logos should always be readable in black and white.


Jessica Petersen
UI Designer
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-----Original Message-----
From: ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org [mailto:ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org] On Behalf Of Angie Wingert
Sent: Friday, June 29, 2007 3:27 PM
To: UGAF General Discussion
Subject: Re: [UGAF] Critiques

That's not it. You've just gotten so much input. It's been good  
input, but I didn't know if you wanted more. (also didn't realize you  
didn't receive any on this)

  This is actually my favorite. It makes me feel tranquil while  
speaking to the concept of teaching without apples and chalkboards. I  
love that word in that font, particularly the q. I might experiment  
with a very light version of the font in part of the word. The top  
illustration is my favorite. I might introduce white into the  
illustration, perhaps in the area surrounding the brain. You never  
know until you try though.

Good work. I think it just gets stronger.


Angie Wingert  |  Ridgeline Creative Design  |  669 S 800 E, SLC UT  
84102  |  801.671.0862  |  www.ridge-creative.com  |  angie at ridge- 
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On Jun 29, 2007, at 3:13 PM, Justin Giboney wrote:

Is it that bad that everyone has given up or is it that good that  
everyone is speechless?

Justin Giboney | www.giboneydesigns.com



On Jun 28, 2007, at 4:20 PM, Justin Giboney wrote:

> I went back to the drawing paper, and I came up with this idea. I  
> like it, but I don't think it is as attractive/engaging.
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> www.poderherbal.com/images/trainquil6.jpg
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> Justin Giboney
> www.giboneydesigns.com
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