[UGAF] Critiques

[Justin Giboney]

The bottom one is in there for those of you who never liked the graph.

www.poderherbal.com/images/trainquil7.jpg

Justin Giboney | www.giboneydesigns.com



On Jun 29, 2007, at 3:32 PM, Jessica Petersen wrote:

> I don't personally like this new concept as much as previous  
> concepts. The brain scan is too medical/scientific - it doesn't  
> speak to the warmth or satisfaction that the consumer is suppose to  
> feel upon using the product.
>
> Your type is definitely much more tight. I would try to further  
> enhance the difference between the "Train" and "quil" in your black  
> versions. Keep in mind that logos should always be readable in  
> black and white.
>
>
> Jessica Petersen
> UI Designer
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org [mailto:ugaf-bounces at ugaf.org] On  
> Behalf Of Angie Wingert
> Sent: Friday, June 29, 2007 3:27 PM
> To: UGAF General Discussion
> Subject: Re: [UGAF] Critiques
>
> That's not it. You've just gotten so much input. It's been good
> input, but I didn't know if you wanted more. (also didn't realize you
> didn't receive any on this)
>
>   This is actually my favorite. It makes me feel tranquil while
> speaking to the concept of teaching without apples and chalkboards. I
> love that word in that font, particularly the q. I might experiment
> with a very light version of the font in part of the word. The top
> illustration is my favorite. I might introduce white into the
> illustration, perhaps in the area surrounding the brain. You never
> know until you try though.
>
> Good work. I think it just gets stronger.
>
>
> Angie Wingert  |  Ridgeline Creative Design  |  669 S 800 E, SLC UT
> 84102  |  801.671.0862  |  www.ridge-creative.com  |  angie at ridge-
> creative.com
>
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>
>
> On Jun 29, 2007, at 3:13 PM, Justin Giboney wrote:
>
> Is it that bad that everyone has given up or is it that good that
> everyone is speechless?
>
> Justin Giboney | www.giboneydesigns.com
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>
>
> On Jun 28, 2007, at 4:20 PM, Justin Giboney wrote:
>
>> I went back to the drawing paper, and I came up with this idea. I
>> like it, but I don't think it is as attractive/engaging.
>>
>> www.poderherbal.com/images/trainquil6.jpg
>>
>> Justin Giboney
>> www.giboneydesigns.com
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